December Nights

this is a good poem. i don't really have any bad vibes about this poem at all. except i just want to comment on the one line where you said ...

i LOVE it. it screams 'true poet' at me. i will look into your other works to see if you are as much a genius as i think you are. ...

i am so sorry this happened to you. i myself don't have a dad like this but two of my friends have a dad kind of like this. i feel ...

i have bugged so many people about this and you are no different, hands off the enter key!! so many lines i can't even count them i hate when you ...

glad to know i could help. this one is so good i love it, i started singing it myself. its such a good one, except for just one typo, in ...

this is very visual, and image making is very good for this kind of a poem. i love the ripping apart of clothes line, it really does express the rage ...

this poem is very intriguing. i like the way you are in prison bars, you can tell there is hostility. but the part where you say something i don't feel ...

First I would just like to say LET GO OF THE ENTER KEY. sorry that bugs me a lot it is my poem peev. I think this is a very ...

I LOVE IT!!! I think this is a great poem, and yeah it could be used as a song too. Most of my works are made for songs, bat are ...

I love this piece. It gives an air of mystery and yet tells all. At first I thought that the way you used the term "dog" was normal. But then ...

*Yawns* oh, yeah, wait, okay, so your poem, it was confusing. I sense no whatever the other person said. Plus I'm tired and an suffering through English class right now, ...

Yeah, it does kinda seem a little short. But hey sometimes a great many things can be said, short and sweet. Like the word "yes" can answer in so many ...

The title could be something different because the only line that relates to it is the last one. This is like poetically asking someone out, right? Because that's what I ...

ME LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!!! I love this kind of poetry! It just speaks wonderful things to me. I love your theme thing, but in the description thing you make ...

AAAAHHHH!!!!!!!!!! its a good thought but not exactly a good poem. It has it's highlights, but delete the smile guy and if you're going to capitalize "He" and then not ...